The Other Side- Gwen Stacy & Ben Reilly

Diskussioner om serieskapande för proffs och amatörer.
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Inläggav spindelmannenelektra » mån 27 okt 2008, 13:30

Den är ju störtskön. Du är ju grym.[8D] Jag har nu kommit ganska lång i del 2. Part 1 Chapter 1-4 är klara. Chapter 2 part 1 är nu klar likaså. Skall sätta igång med del 6 (Part 2 Chapter 2) ikväll. Jag kan skicka hela till dig Robrocker om du vill. Tack för bilden den är klockren.
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"We all walk a fine line between extremes the key is not to trip".

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Inläggav spindelmannenelektra » fre 06 feb 2009, 02:37

Har nu skrivit klart de första 2 kapiteln, 8 delar. Skönt. Har exprimenterat lite och lagt in lite bilder. Se första inlägg. Har gjort klart två tidningsböcker hemma med bilder och allt. Gud vad kul det här har varit. Fast nu börjar allvaret. Det skall nog bli tufft för dessa åtta hjältar i fortsättningen. Om någon vill rita några mer bilder skulle jag bli mer än glad. [:)]

Edit: Har nu skrivit klart första delen i kapitel 3, del 9. Känns bra. [:)]

Börjat lite på andra delen i kapitel 3 del 10. Det är kostigt det här med inspiration, ibland har man inget så helt plötsligt kommer det bara. Ingen aning hur det här skall sluta och när de skall sluta heller för den delen, spännande är det i alla fall. De kanske ryker med allihopa.[:)] Måste bara fokusera på detta nu i alla fall. Tänker man på annat så går det åt helvete.

Tänkte just ändra lite i storyn rätta lite stavfel m.m, men det går inte. Vet möjligen admin eller någon av moderatorerna vad som kan vara fel.
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"We all walk a fine line between extremes the key is not to trip".

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Inläggav bromolla » sön 06 sep 2009, 20:16

Jag är nog inte riktigt med i matchen. Skriver du ett manus eller pågår det tecknande i bakgrunden? Vad ska du använda det till?

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Inläggav spindelmannenelektra » sön 06 sep 2009, 20:34

[quote="bromolla"]

Jag är nog inte riktigt med i matchen. Skriver du ett manus eller pågår det tecknande i bakgrunden? Vad ska du använda det till?
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Vi får se det är mest för eget nöje. Tänkte ett tag skicka in till Marvel då jag tror starkt på idén och också storyn men jag vet inte vi får se. Det är bara så underbart och skriva om dessa 8 karaktärer så jag tror jag har mer skoj så här än när jag måste följa vissa riktlinjer. Jag är riktigt, riktigt nöjd med storyn även om den säkert behöver finslipas här och där. Jag tecknar lite vid sidan om också. Men helst skulle jag vilja att någon riktigt duktig tecknar till det hade varit drömmen. Robrocker gjorde ju en riktigt schysst bild då blev jag glad. Men läs gärna hela manuset första inlägget + det tredja sista inlägget. Alltid kul med lite kommentrarer speciellt från de som kan karaktärerna.

Det finns ju serietidningsböcker/stories med ganska få bilder jag tänker då på Elektra/Wolverine Redeemer av Rucka den fungerar rätt bra. Denna storyn kommer att bli en sådan story, få teckningar mycket text. Kan vara bra att få egna bilder i huvudet också. Som sagt läs gärna.

Vet inte alls hur den skall sluta, dessa karaktärer tar verkligen sina egna vägar.
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"We all walk a fine line between extremes the key is not to trip".

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Inläggav bromolla » sön 06 sep 2009, 21:18

[quote="Robrocker"]

Jag har gjort en bild, kanske inte har direkta inslag ifrån serien men med karaktärer därifrån, en bild jag tyckte vore cool att göra bara. Den är tecknad på A4 vilket är synd, min scanner är paj så jag tog kort istället. Bilden ska väl ses som en skiss, jag var inte jättenoga och den är ganska snål med detaljer i bakgrunden osv. Gwen är i mitten, jag tror att hon är mittpunkten av serien. Jag har inte funderat på hur hon ska se ut men jag ville behålla hennes svarta hårband, det är ju klassiskt. Tyvärr syns inte hårbandet på bilden så bra..

Tuschningen suger eftersom jag har råkat ha sönder flera av mina bästa pennor den senaste tiden och fick göra det hela lite grövre. Jag har inte skissat innan denna bilden heller, ingen tumbnail blev gjord utan jag skissade bara direkt på pappret så fick det bli som det blev. Jagtycker den är cool för den är lite old-school så jag gjorde den gamla loggan. =)

Jag kan ta hur hård kritik som helst så lufta gärna tankarna, jag blir garanterat inte sårad utan ser det som bra för utvecklingen. Jag hade själv velat studera poserna närmare, anatomin är väl inte i världsklass, hehe.

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Jag tycker det ser väldigt bra ut generellt. Du påpekar själv att anatomin inte är 100% riktigt. Jag har bara två små invändningar och båda är på Spindelmannen till vänster där. Hans underarm som skjuter nätet är lite för stor. Samma med hans högra lår, som är lite för långt för den stansen han har.

Något som är fantastiskt lätt att missa är en foreshortening (vad kallas det på svenska?) på ett stort objekt som handen på den store killen. Det syns så fruktansvärt tydligt när det blir fel, men när det blir perfekt lägger ingen märke till det. Otacksamt. Du har lyckats perfekt där dock.

Jag har aldrig uppfattat Gwen som speciellt kraftfull, men här har hon fått lår som skulle få Ben Johnson avundsjuk, haha. Hon kanske är ett krafpaket i storyn dock?

Hade varit kul med fler bilder. Bra jobbat!

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Inläggav bromolla » sön 06 sep 2009, 21:33

Jag blev förresten lite sugen på att ta fram ritbrädan igen, så om du vill ha något ritat till serien, speca gärna upp miljö och personer så kan jag kludda lite. Var ett tag sedan jag tecknade superhjälte-grejer men det är väl som att cykla ungefär?

Lite gamla grejer: http://s132.photobucket.com/albums/q29/gsa10132/
Och en nyare när andan föll på i somras: http://www.kooling.se/flux.jpg

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Inläggav spindelmannenelektra » sön 06 sep 2009, 21:52

[quote="bromolla"]

Jag blev förresten lite sugen på att ta fram ritbrädan igen, så om du vill ha något ritat till serien, speca gärna upp miljö och personer så kan jag kludda lite. Var ett tag sedan jag tecknade superhjälte-grejer men det är väl som att cykla ungefär?

Lite gamla grejer: http://s132.photobucket.com/albums/q29/gsa10132/
Och en nyare när andan föll på i somras: http://www.kooling.se/flux.jpg

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Grymt. Toppen. [:)] Du är ju grym, gillar din stil verkligen. Du får gärna rita hur många bilder du vill. Underbart. Läs gärna hela storyn. Det kanske kommer upp bilder i ditt huvud som du vill ta tag i. Vilken underbar dröm om man kunde få lite mer bilder till den här story. Snacka Lycka.
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"I may not agree with what you say, but I will defend to the death your right to say it".



"We all walk a fine line between extremes the key is not to trip".

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Inläggav spindelmannenelektra » sön 06 sep 2009, 22:02

[quote="bromolla"]
Jag har aldrig uppfattat Gwen som speciellt kraftfull, men här har hon fått lår som skulle få Ben Johnson avundsjuk, haha. Hon kanske är ett krafpaket i storyn dock?
Hade varit kul med fler bilder. Bra jobbat!
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Gärna flera bilder från alla. Ja Gwen är rätt speciell i storyn hon får ju vingar m.m. Tanken är väl att hon skall vara Romitalik fast lite mer självständigare och tuffare. Kul att du läste storyn eller delar av den Robrocker önskar lite fler kunde tas sig an den. Tror ni tycker om den när ni kommer in i det.
Som sagt fy fan vad glad jag skulle bli med lite mer bilder. Det skulle vara riktig JULAFTON. Vill du ha mer kommentarer kring hur jag tänkt på miljön Bromolla så kan vi ju skicka meddelande.

Första inlägget i denna tråd innehåller de första 9 delarna. Nästa tre delarna kan ni läsa på sista posten i denna tråd.


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"I may not agree with what you say, but I will defend to the death your right to say it".



"We all walk a fine line between extremes the key is not to trip".

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Inläggav Agentum » tis 06 okt 2009, 11:19

Oj, det är mycket att läsa.

Jag har aldrig riktigt klarat läsa fanfiction kring sånt här förr, men det finns ju en hel del på nätet.
Angel har jag svårt för som hjälte, fast han har ju stålar iaf, käns lite bittert att säga att han var intressantare som Dark Angel eller vad den varianten kallade sig, och då är jag ju ganska anti mot den perioden egentligen.

Var han särskilt uppfinningsrik egentligen, jag ser honom inte som en Dr.Pym eller Reed?

Men nu var det ju dina favoriter här och inte mina:-)
9mm, i'm never further away than that.

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Inläggav spindelmannenelektra » tor 08 okt 2009, 10:07

[quote="Agentum"]

Oj, det är mycket att läsa.

Jag har aldrig riktigt klarat läsa fanfiction kring sånt här förr, men det finns ju en hel del på nätet.
Angel har jag svårt för som hjälte, fast han har ju stålar iaf, käns lite bittert att säga att han var intressantare som Dark Angel eller vad den varianten kallade sig, och då är jag ju ganska anti mot den perioden egentligen.

Var han särskilt uppfinningsrik egentligen, jag ser honom inte som en Dr.Pym eller Reed?

Men nu var det ju dina favoriter här och inte mina:-)
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Angel är en karaktär jag kommit på själv. Hon är en sydamerikansk kort tjej som kan flyga och som kan "projicera" fiendens krafter. Det finns säkert andra "angels". Men detta är min egen karaktär. Läs gärna hela storyn om du orkar Agentum.
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Inläggav spindelmannenelektra » tor 08 okt 2009, 10:27

Det verkar inte fungera att fortsätta skriva i första inlägget, det är väl för långt så jag fortsätter här. Man måste nog läsa allt om man skall hänga med. Fortsätter med del 12 kapitel 3: del 2 av 4 och 3 av 4 och 4 av 4. Kul om någon läser:


RESCUE MISSION
Chapter 3
2 of 4

You made it guys, Thank God. Is Gwen coming along later, Captain Stacy looks at Nick. I am afraid not Captain, she is at the Demon's nest up in the sky, you remember the White Palace, don't you?

Captain looks at Nick. That's ok then. What do you mean, says Nick staring at Cap. Let's just say I have got an aquaintance there, and she will be safe and well taking care of.

"But what about the Demons", screams Angel. Don't you worry dear Angel she will be fine, trust me. Now I want you both to come in here for a cup of Heaven. Nick lets Falcon stay in the garage. They sit down in Gwen's and Reilly's now tied up house. Apparently, Elektra, Fury and Parker just came straight through that roof, Nick points up to the roof.
How is that possible Cap? You tell me Nick, you should now, shouldn't you? Nick continues: This I don't understand. We are on the other side and here we come when we die. But the weird part is that Elektra, Fury and Parker don't look dead to me. Cap nods his head. Elektra has been here before and she managed to go back. True Nick nods. And you managed to get Spider-Woman here Nick didn't you Angel adds. Ok says Nick. I thought you had all this planned Nick, Cap. wonders. Nick shakes his head I know we were going to be 6 or 8 on this mission but I expected all them to be dead except Spider-Woman.

Angel look at them both sincerely. Cap and Nick we can't sit here like nothing has happened, the others need our help, we have got to save them. You saw Fury, didn't you Nick? What about the others? Will they cease to exist like the sad ones. (Angel refers to another adventure, read- Nick and Angel's adventure 1-4)
I don't know Nick loooks seriously worried. I didn't see them when I used the thread this can only mean two things either they don't exist no more or the Demons use them for something. How horrible says Angel and her whole body shakes a bit.
What are our options, Cap? Nick who always seem to be the leader when things tighten now asks Cap for advice. You normally know how to handle things on The Other Side, you usually don't ask me for advice, Cap answers him. He doesn't know what else to say.

All of them sit silently for a long moment.
Nick thinks about Gwen and how much fun they have had together him, her and Reilly here on The Other Side. In a way she has saved his life, no doubt he would have ceased to exist without her. Poor Elektra, Fury, Spider-Woman and Spidey had to be dragged to all this.

Angel doesn't know what to think. She is back again here with her love Nick, and that is what keeps her all right. She doesn't know what to think about her new made friends. She thinks about Falcon, how amazing the beast was when he saved their life in the battle.

Captain Stacy holds his head low and holds his hands closed together. He thinks about his daughter. Thank God Gwen is ok my dear little Princess. Warren will take care of her for now. What about Reilly? Poor Man he has made Gwen so happy the last few years.

Nick stands up. If we can't sort this out for ourselves we got to use the Map . He walks forward to Gwen's bedroom and close to her bed is a small coffin. He opens it up and takes up a key. He comes back to the others. We will see what the Map will tell us. He opens up the table and as soon as he opens it up he can see a map of the whole valley of The Other Side. It is a really big map where one can spot the nearest surroundings. He shows them where they had their nest under the cave, Gwen kept it well hidden. Cap looks mighty proud. Up here is the Demons' nest where you said Gwen should be ok. On top of the mountain he touches the map, it comes alive and it turns into an authentic miniature version of their side of The Other Side. On top of this major mountain is the Demons' hideout. Unfortunately I can't look further behind the mountain since our adventurous hasn't taken us that far.
I can add a bit to it, says Angel carefully. Nick looks surprised. He and Angels had never been that far away before. You don't know everything about me Mr Nick, she smiles. When she touches the surface further away from the mountain they see what the landscape looks like. She points again, here I believe is Juggernaut and the Sentinels hideout and up here she points towards the sky. No I can't do it, she starts to shiver and starts crying.
What angel, Nick holds her hand. It must be where it lives....Cap looks scared.. Hmm Nick nods.

Nick continues: So we now know our enemies whereabouts can we strike, have we still got a chance? Cap adds: As you know Nick they (meaning Juggernaut and the rest) need all the eight of you to destroy The Other Side. It won't be an easy task for the Demons. The Sentinels will chase them. Why would the Demons keep them alive. I don't know why would they Cap says. He continues: Unless they use them in order to get access to their minds and in that way conquer their enemies. The Demons want to control The Other Side, they don't want it to be destroyed. Good point, Nick comments and all of them light up a bit.


BACK IN THE CAVE
FURY AND ELEKTRA'S BODY
Fury has dragged himself and Elektra's body back to the cave to their hideout. Where are all the others? Sergeant Fury sits down holding Elektra's body in his knee. He checks her pulse. She has still got a pulse. Thank you he says to himself. He thinks back about the time when he himself got shot through the head straight through his eye. He toches his eyefold, man I was lucky to be alive that time, but it is not nice to have bullet left in your brain. He uses parts of his clothes, sleeves to be exact, to stop the blood flow from Elektra's head. Then a strange thought comes to his mind, what happens when you die here. When you are on The Other Side you are already dead. Can you die twice? There is noone around to ask the question. Fuck it, he thinks out loud. Fury is not a doctor he doesn't know what to do, he just holds Elektra's head high. Where are the others....

DID YOU GET HIM, Elektra has woken up although she has got a bullet hole straight through her forehead. "Sweetie" take it easy answers Fury. TAKE IT EASY , she slaps hard, you just shot me you bastard.
Then she starts kissing him deeply. Please take me, take me she moans. Fury does his duty. Elektra screams out her pleasure.

Afterwards Elektra whispers to Fury. My head is bleeding can you please tighten up my headband. Sure says Nick. She holds him..Gee..You want more don't you..


IN THE DEMON'S NEST FURTHER UP IN THE CAVE
What was that? One of the Demons has just heard Elektra's screams. "Humans". What are we going to do with these pathetic humans. One of the demons, the one imitating Uncle Ben, easily carries the bodies of both Scarlet Spider and Peter Parker in its two hands. The other carries Spider-Woman. I don't know what we are going to do with them. For me they are pretty useless. Look at these three they look the same they seem to have some kind of Spider-like powers.

This one seems to be a female one maybe we can have some fun with her when she wakes up. They both laugh loudly. They are now carrying their victims by the head. They don't really give a shit about them but their Master Demon has told them to take care of their victims in case they can use them for their own advantage. And their Master Demon always like to have his meals fresh. He likes to play around with it a bit before he eats it. It tastes so much better when it is fresh.

Should we prepare the meal for HIM. Is there anything they have got that we can use. I like their clothes lets take them off. They take off the Spiders clothes. Strip them naked. Look how funny they look, they both laugh loudly. What is this, one of them has got hold of Reilly's webshooter. He shoots it straight up in the air. Weird, they both laugh. Should I have this one over my face, he puts on Spidey's mask. Or maybe I should wear this, the other joker is wearing Spider-Woman's costume.

Are you kids having fun? An older Demon pass them. Let the Master have his food will you. Ok, ok they both say but they keep on laughing. They reach the hall. There are heaps of Demons in the Major Hall. They walk all the way up to the front to their Master. Here you are, they throw the naked unconscious Spiders hard on the floor to their Master. Well done Kids, they look fresh and tasty indeed. They are fresh Master not raw. We took their clothes off, the little one looks up to the Master for approval. "Childish" and he punches him hard the face. The other one shows him something. Look what you can do with this. He uses the webshooters.
Hm.. interesting..interesting. GIVE IT TO ME. He pulls it off his hands and it almost makes him bleed. The little one pulls his hand back and it looks mighty hurt. Keep their clothes I will keep this Webbing. The small demons look really weird in their new outfits.

What are you all looking at the Master looks at the audience. LEAVE ME ALONE. I want my meat for myself.


ELEKTRA & NICK FURY
Thanks Nick that was good. It feels better now, I like to feel a bit alive especially in this place. She straightens up her new headband, over the bulletmark, parts of Fury's sleeves has added a new dimension to it. Let's go and look for the others.
Fury and Elektra crawl very fast through the cave. They now take the way the Spideys have made. Their speed is rapid and it seems their stamina is at their top (wonder why?)
Are you sure sure you are ok with the bullet and all? The bullet didn't hit anything fagile if you know what I mean, Elektra answers. She continues: Look at yourself Fury you seem ok, she looks at his blindfold. Ok lets go you lead the way ELEKTRA

Elektra shows Fury her spying-skills and they both can escape their enemies quite easily by crawling on the wall and roof of the cave. They see the weird looking Demons wearing Spider-costumes. They overhear them talking and they understand that they are near.

The Master has put the Spiders in a Cage. They have just woken up. The Master licks his mouth and he takes up a big knife.

Elektra doesn't hesitate for a second. "What are you going to do with that?" The Master Demon looks around quickly. Who dares interfer with my meals, his voice is dead cool.

We. Nick and Elektra now both face him. Nick aims with his weapons but he doesn't dare shooting in case hitting the Spiders. Elektra has her weapons ready.
You don't stand a chance the Leader laugh wholly. The Spiders are now wide awake and witness the spectacle. Both the Spider-Men look firstly at Spider-Woman. They are all naked. Naughty boys she says. The three of them rush towards the end of the cage, they reach up to the Master Demon who is much too focused on Elektra and Fury to even notice them. They take him hard by the neck all three of them and drag him swiftly and very hard against the opening of the cage. The combine powers of the three Spiders makes the Demon fall flat to the ground.

Elektra and Fury run fast to their assistance. They help them out. What are we going to wear they all say at the same time. They rip apart the Masters' jungle wear and then they look like two Tarzans and a Jane. LETS GO FRONTLINERS,Elektra leads them in their right direction back to their hideout. And to their great relief is Gwen there with Warren. Angel, Nick and Captain Stacy are all there. And for the first time since they all got here to The Other Side they all seem happy and everyone is hugging everyone.


The End, don't miss the next episode, should be even better, think about their new costumes.[|)]






GWEN'S HEAVENLY ADVENTURE
Chapter 3
3 of 4

This episode takes place before the Reunion (the last episode). This story will tell the reader what happened to Gwen when she was left up with Warren up in the castle up in heaven's heaven. We will also find out how Angel, Nick and Captain Stacy managed to reach the Frontliner's secret hiding place, the cave, yet again.


The big,old and white door closed itself again.
- It is ok, Warren looks at Gwen.
- How do you know my name, says Gwen angrily.
- We can't stand here by the door and talk the place is crowded by Demons, Warren whispers as quietly as he can.
- I thought you were a Demon.
- Be quiet please, whispers Warren in an even more quiet voice. Put this on, Warren gives Gwen a brown dirty-looking blanket to cover herself. He demands Gwen to put mud all over her face and rest of her visible parts. It is the only way to survive up here. Demons eat humans you know. Gwen shivers. We got to mask ourselves otherwise we will end up as Demons' food.

I didn't expect this place to be so big Gwen looks at Warren. But Gwen you have "lived" here quite a long time, you know Heaven almost never really is what you expect, don't you? Your dad, Captain Stacy, has told me a lot about you and Reilly.

Reilly how is he, wonders Gwen desperately. I don't know dear Gwen, I don't know. He continues: Don't focus on that now. Why don't we see them, Gwen touches her net-thread around her neck, but nothing happens, she can't see a thing. Trust me Gwen we have much more important factors to consider now. Gwen please trust me like your father trust me. Gwen calms down a bit. Then she sees them. The Demons look scarier then ever. But now when she and Warren are covered in mud and brown blankets they don't seem to take any notice of them and the Demons just pass them and muttering something in Gibberish.

Come here Gwen here is a secret passage. They walk through a small, small door. Here is my lab. what is this place Warren? I am building weapons here Gwen. For what, wonders Gwen? We obviously need them against The Darker Sides. You have fought them yourself, these gigantic Robots, called the Sentinels, have you not?

Gwen nods. I want to take some samples, DNA test, from you Gwen is that ok? Can I take some from your wings? Gwen hesitates for a while. Ok, she says. I want to build clones from you, but stronger ones, more mighty ones so we can finally conquer our enemy. Warren scares Gwen quite a bit but at the same time he intrigues her.

Gwen, do you want to talk to your dad? Gwen lightens up. They walk up to a photo on the wall. It is a photo of Captain Stacy. Warren presses the photo and after a second or two Captain Stacy seems to be in the lab with them. It is not a picture of him, it is more like him talking to them. How can he be here and not here, Gwen is very confused.

Heaven, dear Gwen. Heaven is more advanced than Earth. Gwen smiles and starts talking to her dad.
-Gwen, Gwen, how wonderful to see you, I knew Warren would take care of you. There are two others here who wants to talk to you. Angel and Nick appear in front of her.
-Great to see you both, Gwen feels relieved.

Can we save the others now, says Gwen naively. Warren needs to do these tests Gwen. Ok says Gwen and listens to her dad. Then someone knocks on the door and walks into the room. Gwen reacts faster than ever and flies high up to the roof with Warren.
- That bloody Warren where is he when I need him. What is this the Demon walks up to the picture.
-Too late, whispers Warren.
-No way. Gwen focuses hard and turns the Demon into stone. They fly down from the roof. The other Demons will soon notice that he is missing. We have to act fast. Warren seems desperate.
- We know what you can do, Angel, Nick and Captain Stacy say at the same time. Wait for us, hide and so on we will set you free Falcon will help you. Finally Gwen gets to meet Falcon as well. You have changed quite a lot Gwen, Warren faces her. Now back to the testing. Can you spread out your wings properly. Gwen spreads out her wings. Warren is enchanted by the wings. Do you know you can change the color of your wings? Press this buttom here. Warren shows her and the wings look like diamonds, sparkling.

Amazing says Gwen. Can you lay down here, Warren directs her. I need to take off a bit from your wings. Ouch screams Gwen. Oh I didn't realise they were so much part of you, Warren apologizes. Amazing the wings seem to be like a second skin of yours. Do you like the wings? I love them says Gwen. I am finally a hero and it means I am now more like my dear Ben. Ben, thinks Warren. He is my creation. Your creation, Gwen looks surprised. Nevermind, says Warren.

He takes some samples of Gwen and then he mixes it with some other liquids and then he pushes the mix straight into his own vein. Why Warren? I am building an army Gwen, when I combine these different bloods I will be able to create a formula which will make the Demons our Demons. I will turn the Demons into angels. Trust me Gwen.

We will try this on this fellow here. Can you please turn him into a "normal" being again. Gwen focuses hard. The Demon is alive again but before he manages to say a word Warren puts a needle straight into the creature's vein.

'Voila', he is now a nice and tame creature, an Angel or a pet if you want to call him that. He pats the Demon. The Demon now looks kind and tame. Warren commands it to do some stuff. The Demon follows Warren's directions in a most convenient way. Now we have got a new alley and he can take over what I have started here in the lab.

How will Falcon get here and how are we going to get out, wonders Gwen. I am sure Falcon will find a way. He has many tricks behind his sleeves. He is a wild and fierce mixture between a chamelont, horse and a beast-dog and I am sure he has no troubles of getting in here and save us.


BACK TO GWEN'S HOUSE- ANGEL, NICK, CAPTAIN STACY & FALCON
The three of them are on their way to garage to check on Falcon. The beast-horse seem ok. Angel pats him kindly and lovingly on the nose. My hero, she says to him, my hero.

Can he carry the three of us. Falcon makes a beast like sound and they understand that it is a yes they hear. Up they go. Should we teleport wonders Cap. I don't think we can make such a long distance again, but we can try. They all hold each other tightly by their hands and off they go. But it does not work the way they want it to. Instead they end up just in front of a fierce-looking Sentinel far from the Palace.

KILL IT, KILL IT. The Sentinel fires. This time Falcon, Angel and Nick have no time to react. But Cap. is prepeared he pulls up a wodden stick and manage to hold it up as a shield and the bullets bounce off.

- I didn't know of these power of yours, Nick smiles.
- The Old Man isn't "Dead" yet, Cap laughs.
But now the Sentinel is much more determined. It uses a stronger blast, stronger than ever before, a blast which would finish off anyone. Falcon is now prepared and jumps swiftly away from it.

The Sentinel is off guards. Falcon flies close to its head. Nick jumps off straight on top of the Sentinel's head.
- We could use one of these, couldn't we? He knows where its control system is and shuts it down. It falls heavily down. This we could use for our advantage.

Nick sits down on top of it and he, Angel and Cap. changes around the equipment properly and now the Sentinel follows all their commands. Nick opens up "the back" of the Sentinel and lets Cap and Falcon sit there. He and Angel steer the Sentinel up front. Go says, Nick go. The Sentinel follows his commands. Now it will be a lot easier for us to rescue Gwen and Warren.

It doesn't take them long to reach the White Palace, The Demon's Nest. They stop when they are close to the main entrance so they can't be spotted.
-Can you make it Falcon, Nick ask.
Falcon flies forward. He enters the Demon's nest. The Demons don't see him as an intruder since he is a beast so Falcon can easily move forward.

There he is says Gwen. Gwen and Warren jump on him and they can quickly fly out from the Nest. The five of them, Warren, Gwen, Angel, Nick and Cap + the Sentinel and Falcon now head off to their Headquarters, The Cave. It is a very easy trip now considering they are flying on the Sentinel. When they get to their cave they turn off the Sentinel and hide it outside The Cave. Then they all enter The Cave.



THE FRONTLINERS' HEADQUARTERS-THE CAVE
Chapter 3
4 of 4

Eight Main characters
Here comes a short, short description on how they have changed during their adventures on The Other Side. All of the eight characters, heroes, Frontliners, are wearing a net-thread around their necks, Gwen's thread is the most noticeable one:


1. Gwen Stacy: She looks like an Angel, her Angel dress is sparkling, diamonds-look. He wings are very much part of her. She is still wearing her headband and she has a very clear net-thread around her neck. She has mud all over her face and is covered up in a brown blanket.

2. Ben Reilly: He looks a bit like Tarzan. He is a blond "Peter Parker, wearing Tarzan-wear.

3. Peter Parker: He looks like Ben but he has got brown hair, also wearing his Tarzan wear. They have made their "uniform", pants, from The Master Demon's clothes.

4. Spider-Woman: She looks like Tarzan's Jane.

5. Elektra: She has a bullet hole straight through her head but instead of her "normal" red headband she has now got a thicker blue headband. Nick Fury's sleeves are now covering her head and stopping the blood flow.

6. Nick Fury: He looks the same, but he is missing his sleeves. He looks like he is wearing a "t-shirt-uniform".

7. Nick: Weird unusual hair style. His hair goes in many directions. He looks a bit rough and he hasn't shaved for a while.

8. Angel: Nick's girlfriend is a short, South-American girl. She has wings but they are not visible now. Her palms are visible and one can notice her "projecting-powers" if one looks at her carefully.

+ Other Comrades

I Captain Stacy: Gwen's dad, looks the same except from that he is carrying a magic stick, which looks like a normal walking stick.

II Warren: Looks the same.

III One Gigantic Sentinel: It is hidden outside their cave.

IV Falcon: Their own tame beast. It looks like a mixture between a beast, horse, dog and a chamelont. Probably the strongest of them all.

V One Friendly Demon: It is situated up in the White Palace- The Demon's Nest.


Frontliners's Safe Posts
+ The Cave-Their main Headquarter
+ Gwen Stacy and Ben Reilly's House
+ Nick's House
+ A laboratory room in the White Palace


Nick speaks to them all:
"We are now eight in our team. All of us are gathered here and our mission is to get rid of the Darker forces on The Other Side. To do that we must be prepared, we now have a stronger force than we have had before. We are eight + Captain Stacy, Warren, our own Sentinel, Falcon and one Demon. It looks better than ever but the enemies still outnumber us but perhaps we can surprise them somehow. We must watch out for their posts.

The Cave is just a safe place where we are, but in the mountain the Demons rule and we have as you all have noticed been stripped a bit by them, they all laugh a bit and look at the Spiders. Sure Tarzan and Jane- "look-alike" can be tough, but guys you really should have brought your web-shooters. How useful are you guys really?" Nick stares at the three of them: Peter Parker, Ben Reilly and Spider-Woman.

"We will come up with something", they all say at the same time. Nick continues: "Warren and Captain Stacy have we got any other allies up here?" "Noone who has got enough strength I believe we have to take down the enemy by ourselves", answers Captain Stacy.

Nick continues: "Are you all right Elektra?" "Fury's bandage is ok, the bullet must have gone straight through my head. Unfortunately I can't feel what juggernaut's is doing anymore. My brain must be affected somehow. I hope my power will come back when my injury heals. It seems I am weaker than ever. But I am "alive" and I hope I will stay "alive"." "I am not sure you are "alive" anymore Elektra, answers Nick sadly. I believe you are actually "dead" now and you are on The Other Side for good." But who knows you have climbed the Mountain of death before maybe you can do it again and come back to life again." Elektra looks really sad now and she falls, Fury takes her in his arms.

Gwen interrupts Nick. "We should really take it easy for a couple of days and just socialize. We deserve a bit of rest. Here we will be totally safe. The Demons, Sentinels, Climbers and Juggernaut etc, will not look here again, they think we are far away. They don't realise that we are at their "doorstep". We are totally safe here. I can feel it". The Spiders nod. "Our spider sense tell us we are safe here for now."

After this Gwen walks around the Cave and ask the others where they want to sleep. She makes beds out of stone. "I want to sleep here with Ben is that all right". She points to a corner in the cave. "You are so cute Gwen", Reilly walks up to her. Somehow Reilly doesn't feel so close to her anymore. Weird feeling she tries not to think about it, she shakes it off. Cap. Angel and Nick show the others all the food they have brought. Falcon has carried a lot of food on his back. Gwen "builds" a kitchen table to them all and chairs as well. In some ways the situation seems more bearable. The stank from the Climbers have died away since they are all made of stone. Gwen continues to make beds to everyone.

Spider-Woman insists on sleeping up in a corner close to the roof. Cap and Warren sleep close to Reilly and and Gwen. Falcon gets his own little corner where he falls asleep immediately after he has been given loads of vegetarian food. The others sit around the table and eat quietly. "How is your wife", Reilly ask Captain Stacy? They are ok, they don't know anything about this. "Won't she miss you", says Gwen. "No they are ok", answers Cap.

"What are going to do about the web-shooters" "Parker-Tarzan" ask the others. "I thought you had built them yourself, can you make new ones? Maybe you can use some equipment from the Sentinel", Fury replies.

"Good idea". After the delicious dinner the three Spiders sneak out and take some equipment from the Sentinels. The three of them come back with a lot of material from the Sentinel.

The Spiders come back to their cave. They now look like future Spider-men. “Cool outfits”, says Fury. You guys look hot says Spider-Woman. I will stick to what I wear says Spider-Woman, she isn’t wearing much. They are all gathered around a big stone table.
1.Gwen,
2. Warren,
3. Captain Stacy,
4. Spider-Woman,
5. Nick,
6. Nick Fury,
7. Angel,
8. Spider-Man
9. Elektra and
10. Scarlet Spider
“What will happen now”, wonders Ben Reilly, alias Scarlet Spider. “We are all alive after tough battles that’s a good start”, says Captain Stacy. Cap continues “You have got it all Nick, don’t you”? “What do you mean”, Nick seems surprised. “Just tell them Nick, tell them”, Cap is impatient.
Long silence
Nick slowly starts talking. “Ok Team, Frontliners, we tried to pass Heroes´Mountain but we weren’t very successful, were we? The Demons plus the Sentinels and Juggernaut are just too strong. Angel you know what this is all about, don’t you? You have passed the mountain, haven’t you? And you Elektra you have actually gone all the way haven’t you”? Elektra replies: “Yep apparently but unfortunately I haven’t got the slightest bit of memory from it”.
Nick Continues “Ok Front-liners we must pass Heroes Mountain, we must reach the other side in order to keep the intruders away and keep the order and balance in our paradise. Our paradise is doomed. There are new-combers here in our Paradise who are only here to make sure it is destroyed. That is why I have gathered all of you here. Usually “the dead ones” (he is talking about Gwen. Cap. Stacy, Warren, Scarlet Spider and a few others) are enough for us to keep intruders away but now there are too many of them here now. Elektra helped us out last time, and Angel showed the way. It was an easy match for us and Reilly to “keep the balance” here on the other side. (This is a totally different story read Elektra/Reilly nr 1-2) But now we had to get some help from “people who are alive”, he looks at Spider-Man, Spider-Woman, Elektra and Nick Fury. I am sorry to drag you here from your lives, but I had to”. Fury, Elektra and Spider-Man look shocked but one could see from their facial expressions that they all grasp the importance of their mission. Gwen whispers to Reilly. “I never thought your adventures with Nick were dangerous. Now I know who that ninja-girl is who impressed you so much during one of your adventures.” She looked at Elektra, and one could tell she was a bit envious. She touched her wings and thought for herself I will show them this time, I will show them what I can do.

Suddenly the stone walls got totally hammered. The Sentinels had perhaps found their spot. The whole “room” is bouncing up and down. “Shit, they are coming through”, Angel screamed out desperately. “Don’t worry the walls are impossible to break”, Gwen looked confident. And to everyone’s surprise the walls kept intact. Everyone looked at Gwen. “You powers are sure useful”, Nick smiled at Gwen. “Good work honey”, Reilly looked impressed. “Ok, we haven’t got much time we need to re-group, this time we need to be a bit more strategically when we fight the enemy. I have got a few plans of my own. Somehow we need to take control of the Sentinels I have seen Reilly in action, he is a splendid technician and I am sure Parker’s same talent will be of high use for us. Spider-Men, would it be possible for us to use more Sentinels than the one we have? Can you make them work”? Nick looks at the Spiders. Parker and Reilly answer at the same time. “We may not be Tony Stark, but sure we can put them together“. All the girls giggle. “You’d better hurry”, Nick Fury laughs. Parker and Relly ignore Fury’s demand but they sneak out with the help of Gwen. “Elektra can you control Juggernaut completely again now”, Nick looks at Elektra. I will try Nick, I will try. Angel you got to show me the hidden roads, Nick looks at Angel. Angel walks off. Cap and Warren you know what to do. They nod. Spider-Woman and Fury look at Nick, “what do you want us to do”. Fury you know weapons, hey. I need a weapon which can destroy Sentinels, is that possible? Fury nod, and walks away. Spider-Woman I believe Warren and Cap need some help. Everyone is off, Nick looks puzzled. “Man what if we don’t make it. He thinks loudly. “We will make it Gwen answers behind his back. Nick if you can drag people over here, who are alive, then can you take me back? Nick looks at Gwen for a long time. “Why would you go back you have got everything here, Reilly-your love, your mum, dad, relatives etc, ME.” “Ok Nick you can take me back”. I didn’t say that Gwen I didn’t say that. It has never happened Gwen. Elektra was not dead. I have heard about a Man called Dr. Strange, but I don’t think even a Man of his caliber can totally change reality. And Gwen we need you here, you belong in this paradise. Now we have to focus to keep this reality as lovely and wonderful as it can be. That’s our focus now Gwen nothing else, Gwen nothing else. Gwen Stacy is not happy with his answer. Nick looks determined now and looks Gwen into her eyes. “I don’t understand you Gwen. No one absolutely no one over ever wants to go back. You have always been content here, what if Reilly hear what you just said he would be devastated. Gee…maybe I shouldn’t have “played with reality” but I had to we must save our paradise. Why don’t you help Parker and Reilly they need your assistance. He seemed to put more emphasis on Parker then Reilly”. Gwen looks back at Nick frustrated. “Peter Parker”, she says flatly.

“Don’t talk like that to Gwen”, a big Sentinel hand grabs Nick. Nick acts on instinct punching the hand off. Then another major gigantic hand smacks his bottom. “You are a naughty boy Nick”. Suddenly Nick realizes what’s going on and he understands that Reilly and Parker are in control of the Sentinels. “Man you did it fast”, he laughs and then he feels a bit embarrassed. “You can actually control the voices as well. Excellent guys, excellent”! Nick is mighty impressed by the Spider-Men. Parker and Reilly control one Sentinel each and they have their own control-room in the heads of the Sentinels. Great guys great, Gwen smiles. Fury is back showing his new weapons. Man these Sentinels have heavy artillery but now they are ours. Good work Angel smiles. Here let me show you the hidden roads. Warren, Cap and Spider-Woman are all back as well. The roads Angel shows them are well-hidden. I did come through here, she shows them the pass between two of the highest mountain passes. It is a tough road but we can all make it. I don’t know if I dare go through their again. But hey we got to try”. How are we going to take the Sentinels through without getting them suspicious? They will make it through, without getting seen, hopefully says Angel. How did your planning go, Nick turn his head to Spider-Woman, Warren and Cap. Stacy. Well buddy, well says Cap with the help of this excellent Spider-girl we have made a signal to our other “flying friends” that we may need on our journey and we have also contacted our Demon friend up in the Demon’s Nest. Good work. Elektra comes back. I think I have got him again, Juggernaut, but it is hard. I will convince him somehow to come with us. Nick sums it up:

Spiders and Stacy fixed the Sentinels,
Fury the Weapons,
You three, Warren, Spider-Woman and Cap fixed extra guides,
Elektra is doing some heavy work on Juggernaut and
Angel has showed us the path through the mountains
“Excellent team-work Frontliners”, Nick looks proud.
What about you, the whole new team laughs looking at Nick? “A bit of that and a bit of that, he smiles. Now we need rest guys we have a long day tomorrow”. Ok, Spider-Man talks to them all; “Before we go to sleep I wonder one thing. If we get through the mountain pass, if we survive, what waits for us next? Warren looks at him. “We can rest then, because the “flying ones” have their nest behind the pass. They have seen our signal, Spider-Woman’s signal and they wait for us. But the Sentinels attacked them just recently, and so far they are ok, apparently a particular Juggernaut was very lame in the fight which gave our comrades a chance to recover and fight back strongly. Elektra smiles and says; “It was easier to hold my sai against his neck but this mind-game will do for now, I hope I can keep it up, she looks very focused and exhausted it looks like she is in a middle of a big fight. “You are doing well”, Nick says and all of them pat her on the shoulder. “I need rest, she says” She is not used to being touched and being cared for.




THE OTHER SIDE CHAPTER 4

THE LAST AND FINAL BATTLES ON THE OTHER SIDE

Front Liners:
1*Gwen Stacy
2*Scarlet Spider
3*Peter Parker
4*Elektra
5*Nick Fury
6*Nick
7*Angel
8*Spider-Woman
+ Warren, Captain Stacy, Falcon, A Demon-friend,“The Flying Ones” and 3 Sentinels

THE HIGH MOUNTAIN PASS
Chapter 4
1 of 4

Our 8 heroes plus Captain Stacy and Warren and Falcon all wake up early. They all sit down at their table. It is a nice simple table Gwen has made for them, everything is made of stone. Gwen talks to them all: “Have I understood the plan correctly we will all fit in the 3 sentinels and we are going through the highest mountain pass Angel showed us. And we don’t have to sneak because they will think that we are just “normal” Sentinels, is that right? “Yep that’s the plan”, answers Nick. They all get ready and then they take off. The tamed beast Falcon who usually flies by himself doesn’t seem comfortable in the control room of the Sentinel but all the girls, Elektra, Gwen, Spider-Woman and Angel pat him and he seems to get more relaxed. All the girls and the beast Falcon are gathered in one Sentinel, the last one. Ben Reilly alias Scarlet Spider and Peter Parker alias Spider-Man are in the charged of the front Sentinel. Nick, Nick Fury, Warren and Captain Stacy control the middle Sentinel.
They talk to each other through the Sentinels. Parker and Reilly have fixed the voices. Angel and the rest of the girls wondered why they had to go in the back. Angel who knew the roads curiously wondered if it wouldn’t be more convenient if she was in the front. Nick answered quickly. “You all are the far most precious ones we don’t want to lose you, explain the roads in detail to the Spiders. The Spiders know best how the Sentinels work. Please let them go first.” He continued: You are also very good at tackling Elektra’s behavior, I think it is the best if you 3 help her out, she needs to be able to control Juggernaut, if we are going to have any chance at all. The girls seemed ok with that response.

The Heroes Mountain was very high. The whole Team-The Frontliners didn’t understand how Angel had climbed all the way to the top by herself. And Elektra had also done the same thing. It was indeed easier now to pass the Demons they could spot them on their way but the Demons didn’t dare to do anything now. Their own Sentinels travelled fast through the air but it still took days to reach the top of the Heroes Mountain. There were four Sentinels on the top of the mountain guarding it. They sat around an enormous fire. Juggernaut was there as well and he was now bigger than the Sentinels. Once he was friends with the X-Men but here on the other side he was nothing but a friend. Fortunately Elektra now controlled him. The 4 Sentinels looked at the 3 Sentinels coming closer. They looked like they were going to attack our friends. But Juggernaut calmed them down. “They are not our enemy, focus on the enemy”. Elektra controlled him totally. The Frontliners flew passed the enemies and now below them on the other side they could see Sentinels new major city. It looked nothing like paradise. Nick whispered through one sentinel, how long has it been like this? Longer than you think whispered Angel back through the Sentinel. Nick continued. We "3" can’t stop this development it is truly the end of The Other Side. What exactly are they building here? Nick seemed absolutely devastated.
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Inläggav spindelmannenelektra » tor 03 feb 2011, 19:26

Har nu gjort klart 12 delar. Det tar längre tid än vad jag trodde. Det blir nog 16 delar sen får det vara klart. 4 kapitel 16 delar det blir bra det. Får se hur många som överlever. Läs första och näst sista inlägg för att läsa de 12 delarna.
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Inläggav Wakuran » tor 03 feb 2011, 21:34

Hurdan är Marvels policy gällande fanmaterial, förresten? Dels kan det bli problem med copyrightat material, och dels är jag skeptisk till att de skulle läsa icke eftersända manus och göra om dem till serier?

Därmed inte sagt att du inte ska fullfölja projektet, men jag är litet skeptisk till om det verkligen är en bra idé att skicka iväg det...
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Inläggav spindelmannenelektra » tor 03 feb 2011, 21:54

Wakuran skrev:Hurdan är Marvels policy gällande fanmaterial, förresten? Dels kan det bli problem med copyrightat material, och dels är jag skeptisk till att de skulle läsa icke eftersända manus och göra om dem till serier?

Därmed inte sagt att du inte ska fullfölja projektet, men jag är litet skeptisk till om det verkligen är en bra idé att skicka iväg det...


Vi får se. Just nu är det bara kul att skriva. Har bara ett kapitel kvar nu 4 delar sen får det vara klart. 2007 började jag med detta snacka om att det är svårt att avsluta en serie. [:)] Man vet inte hur det skall sluta därför är det extra kul att skriva om dem. Börjar verkligen tycka om de här karaktärerna nu.
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Inläggav APenny4YourThoughts » tor 03 feb 2011, 22:58

Jag är på Agentums linje, jag orkar sällan läsa sånt här. Däremot får man ju salutera uthålligheten i projektet.
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APenny4YourThoughts skrev:Jag är på Agentums linje, jag orkar sällan läsa sånt här. Däremot får man ju salutera uthålligheten i projektet.


Tack eller något får man väl säga. Vi får se om jag orkar slutföra det. Läst just igenom allt själv det tar sitt lilla tag. F-n vad svårt det är att få slut på det på ett bra sätt. Man vill ju ha en härlig final med lite fighter och lite död. Det blir bara större och större, suck... 4 delar till sen får det vara färdigt. Skall sätta ihop det till en liten bok, har lite schyssta bilder som jag har lånat. Det skall bli nice och skönt när det är klart. Svårt att vara vass i sitt skrivande ibland blir det bara trams men ibland får man till det ok. Jag beundrar alla författare, fattar inte hur de orkar producerar så mycket bra.
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Inläggav spindelmannenelektra » fre 22 apr 2011, 20:07

Är nu klar med hela kapitel 3. Har börjat med kapitel 4 del 1 och en del av del 2. Har väl endast 2 och en halv delar kvar. Började med detta 2007, börjar nu se slutet på detta. Det är väldigt kul och spännande med det har tagit sin lilla tid. Jobbar 120% så jag har ju inte så mycket tid över. Önskar jag hade en tecknare då kunde den bli riktigt vasst. Kan tänka mig att betala lite för lite bilder om någon är intresserad. Skulle vilja ha minst 16 bilder en för varje del i alla fall. Robrocker gjorde ju en schysst bild tacksam för den.

Här nere kan man läsa från kapitel 3 del 2 tills kapitel 4 till halva del 2. För att läsa hela storyn får man läsa första inlägget. Är man ett marvelfan och tycker om karaktärerna tror jag man kan tycka om storyn. Men visst lite bilder hade hjälpt.

RESCUE MISSION
Chapter 3
2 of 4

You made it guys, Thank God. Is Gwen coming along later, Captain Stacy looks at Nick. I am afraid not Captain, she is at the Demon's nest up in the sky, you remember the White Palace, don't you?

Captain looks at Nick. That's ok then. What do you mean, says Nick staring at Cap. Let's just say I have got an aquaintance there, and she will be safe and well taking care of.

"But what about the Demons", screams Angel. Don't you worry dear Angel she will be fine, trust me. Now I want you both to come in here for a cup of Heaven. Nick lets Falcon stay in the garage. They sit down in Gwen's and Reilly's now tied up house. Apparently, Elektra, Fury and Parker just came straight through that roof, Nick points up to the roof.
How is that possible Cap? You tell me Nick, you should now, shouldn't you? Nick continues: This I don't understand. We are on the other side and here we come when we die. But the weird part is that Elektra, Fury and Parker don't look dead to me. Cap nods his head. Elektra has been here before and she managed to go back. True Nick nods. And you managed to get Spider-Woman here Nick didn't you Angel adds. Ok says Nick. I thought you had all this planned Nick, Cap. wonders. Nick shakes his head I know we were going to be 6 or 8 on this mission but I expected all them to be dead except Spider-Woman.

Angel look at them both sincerely. Cap and Nick we can't sit here like nothing has happened, the others need our help, we have got to save them. You saw Fury, didn't you Nick? What about the others? Will they cease to exist like the sad ones. (Angel refers to another adventure, read- Nick and Angel's adventure 1-4)
I don't know Nick loooks seriously worried. I didn't see them when I used the thread this can only mean two things either they don't exist no more or the Demons use them for something. How horrible says Angel and her whole body shakes a bit.
What are our options, Cap? Nick who always seem to be the leader when things tighten now asks Cap for advice. You normally know how to handle things on The Other Side, you usually don't ask me for advice, Cap answers him. He doesn't know what else to say.

All of them sit silently for a long moment.
Nick thinks about Gwen and how much fun they have had together him, her and Reilly here on The Other Side. In a way she has saved his life, no doubt he would have ceased to exist without her. Poor Elektra, Fury, Spider-Woman and Spidey had to be dragged to all this.

Angel doesn't know what to think. She is back again here with her love Nick, and that is what keeps her all right. She doesn't know what to think about her new made friends. She thinks about Falcon, how amazing the beast was when he saved their life in the battle.

Captain Stacy holds his head low and holds his hands closed together. He thinks about his daughter. Thank God Gwen is ok my dear little Princess. Warren will take care of her for now. What about Reilly? Poor Man he has made Gwen so happy the last few years.

Nick stands up. If we can't sort this out for ourselves we got to use the Map . He walks forward to Gwen's bedroom and close to her bed is a small coffin. He opens it up and takes up a key. He comes back to the others. We will see what the Map will tell us. He opens up the table and as soon as he opens it up he can see a map of the whole valley of The Other Side. It is a really big map where one can spot the nearest surroundings. He shows them where they had their nest under the cave, Gwen kept it well hidden. Cap looks mighty proud. Up here is the Demons' nest where you said Gwen should be ok. On top of the mountain he touches the map, it comes alive and it turns into an authentic miniature version of their side of The Other Side. On top of this major mountain is the Demons' hideout. Unfortunately I can't look further behind the mountain since our adventurous hasn't taken us that far.
I can add a bit to it, says Angel carefully. Nick looks surprised. He and Angels had never been that far away before. You don't know everything about me Mr Nick, she smiles. When she touches the surface further away from the mountain they see what the landscape looks like. She points again, here I believe is Juggernaut and the Sentinels hideout and up here she points towards the sky. No I can't do it, she starts to shiver and starts crying.
What angel, Nick holds her hand. It must be where it lives....Cap looks scared.. Hmm Nick nods.

Nick continues: So we now know our enemies whereabouts can we strike, have we still got a chance? Cap adds: As you know Nick they (meaning Juggernaut and the rest) need all the eight of you to destroy The Other Side. It won't be an easy task for the Demons. The Sentinels will chase them. Why would the Demons keep them alive. I don't know why would they Cap says. He continues: Unless they use them in order to get access to their minds and in that way conquer their enemies. The Demons want to control The Other Side, they don't want it to be destroyed. Good point, Nick comments and all of them light up a bit.


BACK IN THE CAVE
FURY AND ELEKTRA'S BODY
Fury has dragged himself and Elektra's body back to the cave to their hideout. Where are all the others? Sergeant Fury sits down holding Elektra's body in his knee. He checks her pulse. She has still got a pulse. Thank you he says to himself. He thinks back about the time when he himself got shot through the head straight through his eye. He toches his eyefold, man I was lucky to be alive that time, but it is not nice to have bullet left in your brain. He uses parts of his clothes, sleeves to be exact, to stop the blood flow from Elektra's head. Then a strange thought comes to his mind, what happens when you die here. When you are on The Other Side you are already dead. Can you die twice? There is noone around to ask the question. Fuck it, he thinks out loud. Fury is not a doctor he doesn't know what to do, he just holds Elektra's head high. Where are the others....

DID YOU GET HIM, Elektra has woken up although she has got a bullet hole straight through her forehead. "Sweetie" take it easy answers Fury. TAKE IT EASY , she slaps hard, you just shot me you bastard.
Then she starts kissing him deeply. Please take me, take me she moans. Fury does his duty. Elektra screams out her pleasure.

Afterwards Elektra whispers to Fury. My head is bleeding can you please tighten up my headband. Sure says Nick. She holds him..Gee..You want more don't you..


IN THE DEMON'S NEST FURTHER UP IN THE CAVE
What was that? One of the Demons has just heard Elektra's screams. "Humans". What are we going to do with these pathetic humans. One of the demons, the one imitating Uncle Ben, easily carries the bodies of both Scarlet Spider and Peter Parker in its two hands. The other carries Spider-Woman. I don't know what we are going to do with them. For me they are pretty useless. Look at these three they look the same they seem to have some kind of Spider-like powers.

This one seems to be a female one maybe we can have some fun with her when she wakes up. They both laugh loudly. They are now carrying their victims by the head. They don't really give a shit about them but their Master Demon has told them to take care of their victims in case they can use them for their own advantage. And their Master Demon always like to have his meals fresh. He likes to play around with it a bit before he eats it. It tastes so much better when it is fresh.

Should we prepare the meal for HIM. Is there anything they have got that we can use. I like their clothes lets take them off. They take off the Spiders clothes. Strip them naked. Look how funny they look, they both laugh loudly. What is this, one of them has got hold of Reilly's webshooter. He shoots it straight up in the air. Weird, they both laugh. Should I have this one over my face, he puts on Spidey's mask. Or maybe I should wear this, the other joker is wearing Spider-Woman's costume.

Are you kids having fun? An older Demon pass them. Let the Master have his food will you. Ok, ok they both say but they keep on laughing. They reach the hall. There are heaps of Demons in the Major Hall. They walk all the way up to the front to their Master. Here you are, they throw the naked unconscious Spiders hard on the floor to their Master. Well done Kids, they look fresh and tasty indeed. They are fresh Master not raw. We took their clothes off, the little one looks up to the Master for approval. "Childish" and he punches him hard the face. The other one shows him something. Look what you can do with this. He uses the webshooters.
Hm.. interesting..interesting. GIVE IT TO ME. He pulls it off his hands and it almost makes him bleed. The little one pulls his hand back and it looks mighty hurt. Keep their clothes I will keep this Webbing. The small demons look really weird in their new outfits.

What are you all looking at the Master looks at the audience. LEAVE ME ALONE. I want my meat for myself.


ELEKTRA & NICK FURY
Thanks Nick that was good. It feels better now, I like to feel a bit alive especially in this place. She straightens up her new headband, over the bulletmark, parts of Fury's sleeves has added a new dimension to it. Let's go and look for the others.
Fury and Elektra crawl very fast through the cave. They now take the way the Spideys have made. Their speed is rapid and it seems their stamina is at their top (wonder why?)
Are you sure sure you are ok with the bullet and all? The bullet didn't hit anything fragile if you know what I mean, Elektra answers. She continues: Look at yourself Fury you seem ok, she looks at his blindfold. Ok lets go you lead the way ELEKTRA

Elektra shows Fury her spying-skills and they both can escape their enemies quite easily by crawling on the wall and roof of the cave. They see the weird looking Demons wearing Spider-costumes. They overhear them talking and they understand that they are near.

The Master has put the Spiders in a Cage. They have just woken up. The Master licks his mouth and he takes up a big knife.

Elektra doesn't hesitate for a second. "What are you going to do with that?" The Master Demon looks around quickly. Who dares interfer with my meals, his voice is dead cool.

We. Nick and Elektra now both face him. Nick aims with his weapons but he doesn't dare shooting in case hitting the Spiders. Elektra has her weapons ready.
You don't stand a chance the Leader laugh wholly. The Spiders are now wide awake and witness the spectacle. Both the Spider-Men look firstly at Spider-Woman. They are all naked. Naughty boys she says. The three of them rush towards the end of the cage, they reach up to the Master Demon who is much too focused on Elektra and Fury to even notice them. They take him hard by the neck all three of them and drag him swiftly and very hard against the opening of the cage. The combine powers of the three Spiders makes the Demon fall flat to the ground.

Elektra and Fury run fast to their assistance. They help them out. What are we going to wear they all say at the same time. They rip apart the Masters' jungle wear and then they look like two Tarzans and a Jane. LETS GO FRONTLINERS,Elektra leads them in their right direction back to their hideout. And to their great relief is Gwen there with Warren. Angel, Nick and Captain Stacy are all there. And for the first time since they all got here to The Other Side they all seem happy and everyone is hugging everyone.


The End, don't miss the next episode, should be even better, think about their new costumes.






GWEN'S HEAVENLY ADVENTURE
Chapter 3
3 of 4

This episode takes place before the Reunion (the last episode). This story will tell the reader what happened to Gwen when she was left up with Warren up in the castle up in heaven's heaven. We will also find out how Angel, Nick and Captain Stacy managed to reach the Frontliner's secret hiding place, the cave, yet again.


The big,old and white door closed itself again.
- It is ok, Warren looks at Gwen.
- How do you know my name, says Gwen angrily.
- We can't stand here by the door and talk the place is crowded by Demons, Warren whispers as quietly as he can.
- I thought you were a Demon.
- Be quiet please, whispers Warren in an even more quiet voice. Put this on, Warren gives Gwen a brown dirty-looking blanket to cover herself. He demands Gwen to put mud all over her face and rest of her visible parts. It is the only way to survive up here. Demons eat humans you know. Gwen shivers. We got to mask ourselves otherwise we will end up as Demons' food.

I didn't expect this place to be so big Gwen looks at Warren. But Gwen you have "lived" here quite a long time, you know Heaven almost never really is what you expect, don't you? Your dad, Captain Stacy, has told me a lot about you and Reilly.

Reilly how is he, wonders Gwen desperately. I don't know dear Gwen, I don't know. He continues: Don't focus on that now. Why don't we see them, Gwen touches her net-thread around her neck, but nothing happens, she can't see a thing. Trust me Gwen we have much more important factors to consider now. Gwen please trust me like your father trust me. Gwen calms down a bit. Then she sees them. The Demons look scarier then ever. But now when she and Warren are covered in mud and brown blankets they don't seem to take any notice of them and the Demons just pass them and muttering something in Gibberish.

Come here Gwen here is a secret passage. They walk through a small, small door. Here is my lab. what is this place Warren? I am building weapons here Gwen. For what, wonders Gwen? We obviously need them against The Darker Sides. You have fought them yourself, these gigantic Robots, called the Sentinels, have you not?

Gwen nods. I want to take some samples, DNA test, from you Gwen is that ok? Can I take some from your wings? Gwen hesitates for a while. Ok, she says. I want to build clones from you, but stronger ones, more mighty ones so we can finally conquer our enemy. Warren scares Gwen quite a bit but at the same time he intrigues her.

Gwen, do you want to talk to your dad? Gwen lightens up. They walk up to a photo on the wall. It is a photo of Captain Stacy. Warren presses the photo and after a second or two Captain Stacy seems to be in the lab with them. It is not a picture of him, it is more like him talking to them. How can he be here and not here, Gwen is very confused.

Heaven, dear Gwen. Heaven is more advanced than Earth. Gwen smiles and starts talking to her dad.
-Gwen, Gwen, how wonderful to see you, I knew Warren would take care of you. There are two others here who wants to talk to you. Angel and Nick appear in front of her.
-Great to see you both, Gwen feels relieved.

Can we save the others now, says Gwen naively. Warren needs to do these tests Gwen. Ok says Gwen and listens to her dad. Then someone knocks on the door and walks into the room. Gwen reacts faster than ever and flies high up to the roof with Warren.
- That bloody Warren where is he when I need him. What is this the Demon walks up to the picture.
-Too late, whispers Warren.
-No way. Gwen focuses hard and turns the Demon into stone. They fly down from the roof. The other Demons will soon notice that he is missing. We have to act fast. Warren seems desperate.
- We know what you can do, Angel, Nick and Captain Stacy say at the same time. Wait for us, hide and so on we will set you free Falcon will help you. Finally Gwen gets to meet Falcon as well. You have changed quite a lot Gwen, Warren faces her. Now back to the testing. Can you spread out your wings properly. Gwen spreads out her wings. Warren is enchanted by the wings. Do you know you can change the color of your wings? Press this buttom here. Warren shows her and the wings look like diamonds, sparkling.

Amazing says Gwen. Can you lay down here, Warren directs her. I need to take off a bit from your wings. Ouch screams Gwen. Oh I didn't realise they were so much part of you, Warren apologizes. Amazing the wings seem to be like a second skin of yours. Do you like the wings? I love them says Gwen. I am finally a hero and it means I am now more like my dear Ben. Ben, thinks Warren. He is my creation. Your creation, Gwen looks surprised. Nevermind, says Warren.

He takes some samples of Gwen and then he mixes it with some other liquids and then he pushes the mix straight into his own vein. Why Warren? I am building an army Gwen, when I combine these different bloods I will be able to create a formula which will make the Demons our Demons. I will turn the Demons into angels. Trust me Gwen.

We will try this on this fellow here. Can you please turn him into a "normal" being again. Gwen focuses hard. The Demon is alive again but before he manages to say a word Warren puts a needle straight into the creature's vein.

'Voila', he is now a nice and tame creature, an Angel or a pet if you want to call him that. He pats the Demon. The Demon now looks kind and tame. Warren commands it to do some stuff. The Demon follows Warren's directions in a most convenient way. Now we have got a new alley and he can take over what I have started here in the lab.

How will Falcon get here and how are we going to get out, wonders Gwen. I am sure Falcon will find a way. He has many tricks behind his sleeves. He is a wild and fierce mixture between a chamelont, horse and a beast-dog and I am sure he has no troubles of getting in here and save us.


BACK TO GWEN'S HOUSE- ANGEL, NICK, CAPTAIN STACY & FALCON
The three of them are on their way to the garage to check on Falcon. The beast-horse seem ok. Angel pats him kindly and lovingly on the nose. My hero, she says to him, my hero.

Can he carry the three of us. Falcon makes a beast like sound and they understand that it is a yes they hear. Up they go. Should we teleport wonders Cap. I don't think we can make such a long distance again, but we can try. They all hold each other tightly by their hands and off they go. But it does not work the way they want it to. Instead they end up just in front of a fierce-looking Sentinel far from the Palace.

KILL IT, KILL IT. The Sentinel fires. This time Falcon, Angel and Nick have no time to react. But Cap. is prepeared he pulls up a wodden stick and manage to hold it up as a shield and the bullets bounce off.

- I didn't know of these power of yours, Nick smiles.
- The Old Man isn't "Dead" yet, Cap laughs.
But now the Sentinel is much more determined. It uses a stronger blast, stronger than ever before, a blast which would finish off anyone. Falcon is now prepared and jumps swiftly away from it.

The Sentinel is off guards. Falcon flies close to its head. Nick jumps off straight on top of the Sentinel's head.
- We could use one of these, couldn't we? He knows where its control system is and shuts it down. It falls heavily down. This we could use for our advantage.

Nick sits down on top of it and he, Angel and Cap. changes around the equipment properly and now the Sentinel follows all their commands. Nick opens up "the back" of the Sentinel and lets Cap and Falcon sit there. He and Angel steer the Sentinel up front. Go says, Nick go. The Sentinel follows his commands. Now it will be a lot easier for us to rescue Gwen and Warren.

It doesn't take them long to reach the White Palace, The Demon's Nest. They stop when they are close to the main entrance so they can't be spotted.
-Can you make it Falcon, Nick ask.
Falcon flies forward. He enters the Demon's nest. The Demons don't see him as an intruder since he is a beast so Falcon can easily move forward.

There he is says Gwen. Gwen and Warren jump on him and they can quickly fly out from the Nest. The five of them, Warren, Gwen, Angel, Nick and Cap + the Sentinel and Falcon now head off to their Headquarters, The Cave. It is a very easy trip now considering they are flying on the Sentinel. When they get to their cave they turn off the Sentinel and hide it outside The Cave. Then they all enter The Cave.



THE FRONTLINERS' HEADQUARTERS-THE CAVE
Chapter 3
4 of 4

Eight Main characters
Here comes a short, short description on how they have changed during their adventures on The Other Side. All of the eight characters, heroes, Frontliners, are wearing a net-thread around their necks, Gwen's thread is the most noticeable one:


1. Gwen Stacy: She looks like an Angel, her Angel dress is sparkling, diamonds-look. He wings are very much part of her. She is still wearing her headband and she has a very clear net-thread around her neck. She has mud all over her face and is covered up in a brown blanket.

2. Ben Reilly: He looks a bit like Tarzan. He is a blond "Peter Parker", wearing Tarzan-wear.

3. Peter Parker: He looks like Ben but he has got brown hair, also wearing his Tarzan wear. They have made their "uniform", pants, from The Master Demon's clothes.

4. Spider-Woman: She looks like Tarzan's Jane.

5. Elektra: She has a bullet hole straight through her head but instead of her "normal" red headband she has now got a thicker blue headband. Nick Fury's sleeves are now covering her head and stopping the blood flow.

6. Nick Fury: He looks the same, but he is missing his sleeves. He looks like he is wearing a "t-shirt-uniform".

7. Nick: Weird unusual hair style. His hair goes in many directions. He looks a bit rough and he hasn't shaved for a while.

8. Angel: Nick's girlfriend is a short, South-American girl. She has wings but they are not visible now. Her palms are visible and one can notice her "projecting-powers" if one looks at her carefully.

+ Other Comrades

I Captain Stacy: Gwen's dad, looks the same except from that he is carrying a magic stick, which looks like a normal walking stick.

II Warren: Looks the same.

III One Gigantic Sentinel: It is hidden outside their cave.

IV Falcon: Their own tame beast. It looks like a mixture between a beast, horse, dog and a chamelont. Probably the strongest of them all.

V One Friendly Demon: It is situated up in the White Palace- The Demon's Nest.


Frontliners's Safe Posts
+ The Cave-Their main Headquarter
+ Gwen Stacy and Ben Reilly's House
+ Nick's House
+ A laboratory room in the White Palace


Nick speaks to them all:
"We are now eight in our team. All of us are gathered here and our mission is to get rid of the Darker forces on The Other Side. To do that we must be prepared, we now have a stronger force than we have had before. We are eight + Captain Stacy, Warren, our own Sentinel, Falcon and one Demon. It looks better than ever but the enemies still outnumber us but perhaps we can surprise them somehow. We must watch out for their posts.

The Cave is just a safe place where we are, but in the mountain the Demons rule and we have as you all have noticed been stripped a bit by them, they all laugh a bit and look at the Spiders. Sure Tarzan and Jane- "look-alike" can be tough, but guys you really should have brought your web-shooters. How useful are you guys really?" Nick stares at the three of them: Peter Parker, Ben Reilly and Spider-Woman.

"We will come up with something", they all say at the same time. Nick continues: "Warren and Captain Stacy have we got any other allies up here?" "Noone who has got enough strength I believe we have to take down the enemy by ourselves", answers Captain Stacy.

Nick continues: "Are you all right Elektra?" "Fury's bandage is ok, the bullet must have gone straight through my head. Unfortunately I can't feel what juggernaut's is doing anymore. My brain must be affected somehow. I hope my power will come back when my injury heals. It seems I am weaker than ever. But I am "alive" and I hope I will stay "alive"." "I am not sure you are "alive" anymore Elektra, answers Nick sadly. I believe you are actually "dead" now and you are on The Other Side for good." But who knows you have climbed the Mountain of death before maybe you can do it again and come back to life again." Elektra looks really sad now and she falls, Fury takes her in his arms.

Gwen interrupts Nick. "We should really take it easy for a couple of days and just socialize. We deserve a bit of rest. Here we will be totally safe. The Demons, Sentinels, Climbers and Juggernaut etc, will not look here again, they think we are far away. They don't realise that we are at their "doorstep". We are totally safe here. I can feel it". The Spiders nod. "Our spider sense tell us we are safe here for now."

After this Gwen walks around the Cave and ask the others where they want to sleep. She makes beds out of stone. "I want to sleep here with Ben is that all right?" She points to a corner in the cave. "You are so cute Gwen", Reilly walks up to her. Somehow Reilly doesn't feel so close to her anymore. Weird feeling she tries not to think about it, she shakes it off. Cap. Angel and Nick show the others all the food they have brought. Falcon has carried a lot of food on his back. Gwen "builds" a kitchen table to them all and chairs as well. In some ways the situation seems more bearable. The stank from the Climbers have died away since they are all made of stone. Gwen continues to make beds to everyone.

Spider-Woman insists on sleeping up in a corner close to the roof. Cap and Warren sleep close to Reilly and and Gwen. Falcon gets his own little corner where he falls asleep immediately after he has been given loads of vegetarian food. The others sit around the table and eat quietly. "How is your wife", Reilly ask Captain Stacy? They are ok, they don't know anything about this. "Won't she miss you", says Gwen. "No they are ok", answers Cap.

"What are going to do about the web-shooters" "Parker-Tarzan" ask the others. "I thought you had built them yourself, can you make new ones? Maybe you can use some equipment from the Sentinel", Fury replies.

"Good idea". After the delicious dinner the three Spiders sneak out and take some equipment from the Sentinels. The three of them come back with a lot of material from the Sentinel.

The Spiders come back to their cave. They now look like future Spider-men. “Cool outfits”, says Fury. You guys look hot says Spider-Woman. I will stick to what I wear says Spider-Woman, she isn’t wearing much. They are all gathered around a big stone table.
1.Gwen,
2. Warren,
3. Captain Stacy,
4. Spider-Woman,
5. Nick,
6. Nick Fury,
7. Angel,
8. Spider-Man
9. Elektra and
10. Scarlet Spider
“What will happen now”, wonders Ben Reilly, alias Scarlet Spider. “We are all alive after tough battles that’s a good start”, says Captain Stacy. Cap continues “You have got it all Nick, don’t you”? “What do you mean”, Nick seems surprised. “Just tell them Nick, tell them”, Cap is impatient.
Long silence
Nick slowly starts talking. “Ok Team, Frontliners, we tried to pass Heroes´Mountain but we weren’t very successful, were we? The Demons plus the Sentinels and Juggernaut are just too strong. Angel you know what this is all about, don’t you? You have passed the mountain, haven’t you? And you Elektra you have actually gone all the way haven’t you”? Elektra replies: “Yep apparently but unfortunately I haven’t got the slightest bit of memory from it”.
Nick Continues “Ok Front-liners we must pass Heroes Mountain, we must reach the other side in order to keep the intruders away and keep the order and balance in our paradise. Our paradise is doomed. There are new-combers here in our Paradise who are only here to make sure it is destroyed. That is why I have gathered all of you here. Usually “the dead ones” (he is talking about Gwen. Cap. Stacy, Warren, Scarlet Spider and a few others) are enough for us to keep intruders away but now there are too many of them here now. Elektra helped us out last time, and Angel showed the way. It was an easy match for us and Reilly to “keep the balance” here on the other side. (This is a totally different story read Elektra/Reilly nr 1-2) But now we had to get some help from “people who are alive”, he looks at Spider-Man, Spider-Woman, Elektra and Nick Fury. I am sorry to drag you here from your lives, but I had to”. Fury, Elektra and Spider-Man look shocked but one could see from their facial expressions that they all grasp the importance of their mission. Gwen whispers to Reilly. “I never thought your adventures with Nick were dangerous. Now I know who that ninja-girl is who impressed you so much during one of your adventures.” She looked at Elektra, and one could tell she was a bit envious. She touched her wings and thought for herself I will show them this time, I will show them what I can do.

Suddenly the stone walls got totally hammered. The Sentinels had perhaps found their spot. The whole “room” is bouncing up and down. “Shit, they are coming through”, Angel screamed out desperately. “Don’t worry the walls are impossible to break”, Gwen looked confident. And to everyone’s surprise the walls kept intact. Everyone looked at Gwen. “You powers are sure useful”, Nick smiled at Gwen. “Good work honey”, Reilly looked impressed. “Ok, we haven’t got much time we need to re-group, this time we need to be a bit more strategically when we fight the enemy. I have got a few plans of my own. Somehow we need to take control of the Sentinels I have seen Reilly in action, he is a splendid technician and I am sure Parker’s same talent will be of high use for us. Spider-Men, would it be possible for us to use more Sentinels than the one we have? Can you make them work”? Nick looks at the Spiders. Parker and Reilly answer at the same time. “We may not be Tony Stark, but sure we can put them together“. All the girls giggle. “You’d better hurry”, Nick Fury laughs. Parker and Relly ignore Fury’s demand but they sneak out with the help of Gwen. “Elektra can you control Juggernaut completely again now”, Nick looks at Elektra. I will try Nick, I will try. Angel you got to show me the hidden roads, Nick looks at Angel. Angel walks off. Cap and Warren you know what to do. They nod. Spider-Woman and Fury look at Nick, “what do you want us to do”. Fury you know weapons, hey. I need a weapon which can destroy Sentinels, is that possible? Fury nod, and walks away. Spider-Woman I believe Warren and Cap need some help. Everyone is off, Nick looks puzzled. “Man what if we don’t make it. He thinks loudly. “We will make it Gwen answers behind his back. Nick if you can drag people over here, who are alive, then can you take me back? Nick looks at Gwen for a long time. “Why would you go back you have got everything here, Reilly-your love, your mum, dad, relatives etc, ME.” “Ok Nick you can take me back”. I didn’t say that Gwen I didn’t say that. It has never happened Gwen. Elektra was not dead. I have heard about a Man called Dr. Strange, but I don’t think even a Man of his caliber can totally change reality. And Gwen we need you here, you belong in this paradise. Now we have to focus to keep this reality as lovely and wonderful as it can be. That’s our focus now Gwen nothing else, Gwen nothing else. Gwen Stacy is not happy with his answer. Nick looks determined now and looks Gwen into her eyes. “I don’t understand you Gwen. No one absolutely no one over ever wants to go back. You have always been content here, what if Reilly hear what you just said he would be devastated. Gee…maybe I shouldn’t have “played with reality” but I had to we must save our paradise. Why don’t you help Parker and Reilly they need your assistance. He seemed to put more emphasis on Parker then Reilly”. Gwen looks back at Nick frustrated. “Peter Parker”, she says flatly.

“Don’t talk like that to Gwen”, a big Sentinel hand grabs Nick. Nick acts on instinct punching the hand off. Then another major gigantic hand smacks his bottom. “You are a naughty boy Nick”. Suddenly Nick realizes what’s going on and he understands that Reilly and Parker are in control of the Sentinels. “Man you did it fast”, he laughs and then he feels a bit embarrassed. “You can actually control the voices as well. Excellent guys, excellent”! Nick is mighty impressed by the Spider-Men. Parker and Reilly control one Sentinel each and they have their own control-room in the heads of the Sentinels. Great guys great, Gwen smiles. Fury is back showing his new weapons. Man these Sentinels have heavy artillery but now they are ours. Good work Angel smiles. Here let me show you the hidden roads. Warren, Cap and Spider-Woman are all back as well. The roads Angel shows them are well-hidden. I did come through here, she shows them the pass between two of the highest mountain passes. It is a tough road but we can all make it. I don’t know if I dare go through their again. But hey we got to try”. How are we going to take the Sentinels through without getting them suspicious? They will make it through, without getting seen, hopefully says Angel. How did your planning go, Nick turn his head to Spider-Woman, Warren and Cap. Stacy. Well buddy, well says Cap with the help of this excellent Spider-girl we have made a signal to our other “flying friends” that we may need on our journey and we have also contacted our Demon friend up in the Demon’s Nest. Good work. Elektra comes back. I think I have got him again, Juggernaut, but it is hard. I will convince him somehow to come with us. Nick sums it up:

Spiders and Stacy fixed the Sentinels,
Fury the Weapons,
You three, Warren, Spider-Woman and Cap fixed extra guides,
Elektra is doing some heavy work on Juggernaut and
Angel has showed us the path through the mountains
“Excellent team-work Frontliners”, Nick looks proud.
What about you, the whole new team laughs looking at Nick? “A bit of that and a bit of that, he smiles. Now we need rest guys we have a long day tomorrow”. Ok, Spider-Man talks to them all; “Before we go to sleep I wonder one thing. If we get through the mountain pass, if we survive, what waits for us next? Warren looks at him. “We can rest then, because the “flying ones” have their nest behind the pass. They have seen our signal, Spider-Woman’s signal and they wait for us. But the Sentinels attacked them just recently, and so far they are ok, apparently a particular Juggernaut was very lame in the fight which gave our comrades a chance to recover and fight back strongly. Elektra smiles and says; “It was easier to hold my sai against his neck but this mind-game will do for now, I hope I can keep it up, she looks very focused and exhausted it looks like she is in a middle of a big fight. “You are doing well”, Nick says and all of them pat her on the shoulder. “I need rest, she says” She is not used to being touched and being cared for.




THE OTHER SIDE CHAPTER 4

THE LAST AND FINAL BATTLES ON THE OTHER SIDE

Front Liners:
1*Gwen Stacy
2*Scarlet Spider
3*Peter Parker
4*Elektra
5*Nick Fury
6*Nick
7*Angel
8*Spider-Woman
+ Warren, Captain Stacy, Falcon, A Demon-friend,“The Flying Ones” and 3 Sentinels

THE HIGH MOUNTAIN PASS
Chapter 4
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Our 8 heroes plus Captain Stacy and Warren and Falcon all wake up early. They all sit down at their table. It is a nice simple table Gwen has made for them, everything is made of stone. Gwen talks to them all: “Have I understood the plan correctly we will all fit in the 3 sentinels and we are going through the highest mountain pass Angel showed us. And we don’t have to sneak because they will think that we are just “normal” Sentinels, is that right? “Yep that’s the plan”, answers Nick. They all get ready and then they take off. The tamed beast Falcon who usually flies by himself doesn’t seem comfortable in the control room of the Sentinel but all the girls, Elektra, Gwen, Spider-Woman and Angel pat him and he seems to get more relaxed. All the girls and the beast Falcon are gathered in one Sentinel, the last one. Ben Reilly alias Scarlet Spider and Peter Parker alias Spider-Man are in the charged of the front Sentinel. Nick, Nick Fury, Warren and Captain Stacy control the middle Sentinel.
They talk to each other through the Sentinels. Parker and Reilly have fixed the voices. Angel and the rest of the girls wondered why they had to go in the back. Angel who knew the roads curiously wondered if it wouldn’t be more convenient if she was in the front. Nick answered quickly. “You all are the far most precious ones we don’t want to lose you, explain the roads in detail to the Spiders. The Spiders know best how the Sentinels work. Please let them go first.” He continued: You are also very good at tackling Elektra’s behavior, I think it is the best if you 3 help her out, she needs to be able to control Juggernaut, if we are going to have any chance at all. The girls seemed ok with that response.

The Heroes Mountain was very high. The whole Team-The Frontliners didn’t understand how Angel had climbed all the way to the top by herself. And Elektra had also done the same thing. It was indeed easier now to pass the Demons they could spot them on their way but the Demons didn’t dare to do anything now. Their own Sentinels travelled fast through the air but it still took days to reach the top of the Heroes Mountain. There were four Sentinels on the top of the mountain guarding it. They sat around an enormous fire. Juggernaut was there as well and he was now bigger than the Sentinels. Once he was friends with the X-Men but here on the other side he was nothing but a friend. Fortunately Elektra now controlled him. The 4 Sentinels looked at the 3 Sentinels coming closer. They looked like they were going to attack our friends. But Juggernaut calmed them down. “They are not our enemy, focus on the enemy”. Elektra controlled him totally. The Frontliners flew passed the enemies and now below them on the other side they could see Sentinels new major city. It looked nothing like paradise. Nick whispered through one sentinel, how long has it been like this? Longer than you think whispered Angel back through the Sentinel. Nick continued. We "3" can’t stop this development it is truly the end of The Other Side. What exactly are they building here? Nick seemed absolutely devastated.

Angel whispered to all of them “We need to pass through Sentinel city somehow. Can we make it all the way through?” Nick Fury answers: “We haven’t got much of a chance, but let’s go for it.” They land in the middle of a major street. One Big Sentinel stops them: “Where are you headed?” Before the Spiders have a chance to answer, the Sentinel fires straight at them. The Spiders spins a Sentinel web around the Sentinels ankles and he falls flat to the ground. “You got to be kidding Man you turned your Sentinel into a gigantic Spider-Man Sentinel”, Fury laughs. They hide the leftovers of the Sentinel and continue walking towards the centre of the city. Can you climb like a Spider as well laughs Nick using the voice of the Sentinel. Parker and Reilly show the others their moves and climb like a spider up on a high building. Spider-Woman comments: “I can’t believe this is the last thing I will see before I die” She continues: “What can our Sentinel do comb someone’s hair”. Then suddenly many, many Sentinels march just ahead of them. Coming closer and closer.

Elektra comments quickly: “I have it settled”. The enormous Juggernaut land in front of them and all the Sentinels just march passed them. Thanks Elektra says Cap. Stacy through the Sentinel. The controlled Juggernaut then leads the way. I think he is going to show us something, says Elektra. Juggernaut starts walking faster and he starts bouncing up and down to go even faster. All the girls in the last Sentinel giggle. “Can you actually make him bounce Elektra”, wonders Gwen. I can make him do lots of things. Juggernaut starts doing swimming strokes with his arms. Ben cracks up laughing in the front Sentinel. “Tell her to stop I can’t take it no more”, commands Reilly nicely. Juggernaut starts shaking his head and starts screaming loudly. Get out of my head you fucking bitch. Elektra focuses harder then Juggernaut tilts his head forward again and starts walking slowly. “Nice puppy, nice puppy”, whispers Elektra. You shouldn’t play around with him anymore, Cap. Stacy, says demandingly. It is not nice and if he wakes up again who knows if you can control him again. In the size he is in now even the Hulk wouldn’t stand a chance and I think we 3 Sentinels will have a hard time to defeat him. “Dad is right”, says Gwen looking at Elektra. Elektra is too distracted to even listen. Angel pat her back and says in a calm voice: “You are strong Elektra you can do it”. Juggernaut continues walking forward. He stops close to a big building ten times the size of him. “We can’t follow him in there”, says Warren desperately this disguise is not good enough we have to leave him. Elektra talks to all of them:
“I can’t control him much further we need to take off as soon as we possibly can. Fly guys fly as fast as the Sentinels can take you. Once Juggernaut is inside the building he will be himself again. Spiders show us what these Sentinels are made of.” The first Sentinels act in specific Spider way and spins his web faster than humanly possible. His movements really look like a gigantic Spider-Man. The second Sentinel pulls out a major walking stick from his armour and use it to push him forward. He uses the stick in a similar fashion as our friend Gambit but in much more spectacular way. He bounces off after each time the major stick touches the ground. Cap. Stacy looks mighty impressed. My stepson he thinks proudly. The third Sentinel carrying the four girls; Gwen, Spider-Woman, Angel and Elektra and the tame beast Falcon demonstrates its power in a most surprising and impressive way. Mechanical wings spread themselves out from the Sentinels armpits and off they go faster than the wind itself. Angel smiles, even my Nick couldn’t think of this. These Spiders are really something.

Juggernaut is now inside the building. The 3 Frontliners Sentinels are now far, far away. “My head where am I, he screams out in agony. Inside the major house thousands of Sentinels stand straight up in order close to the walls. There is a major thrown in the center of the room. There sits a man very much like our own Superman. But this is not the friendly Superman we are familiar with this Man has no kindness in him at all. He looks down at Juggernaut. Have you sorted out our little problem a yet? What I can sense by the look at my dice our little, little problem isn’t over at all. I don’t want The Other Side to be controlled by morons, by friendly and nice ones. Nick has been in my way for too long. I have built this city in order to crush him and his allies. Juggernaut you were supposed to handle the situation. It wasn’t supposed to be a problem at all for you. My friends on earth promised me victory in bringing you over. And their Sentinel gifts have indeed been valuable but you my dear little friend. You have disappointed me tremendously. I have no longer no use for you.” He then rips Juggernaut apart limb by limb.

I could feel and sense something, Elektra whispers. Elektra falls down inside the Sentinel. Juggernaut I can’t sense him no longer, it feels likes someone has ripped off every leg in my body. The Superman of this world starts throwing the dice again. “Where are they heading. Dice show me the way”. When the six dice land they bounce hardly on the ground to the house. “What was that,” Angels shivers, an echo from the dice can be heard loudly throughout The Other Side. The Dice shivers Cap and Nick. They have heard about them, but they didn’t believe they existed. The Dice can spot anyone on The Other Side. All of the Frontliners then see Superman’s red eyes looking down on them from the sky. You want get far. A major hand, the size of Galactus body, pops out from the sky and reach out for of them. “It is the end Elektra cries”. “I love you Angel”, Nick screams out.” “You are mine”, screams Gwen out to Parker. (We think.) Nick Fury shots with his major gun at the hand, but it is no use. But before the major hand can get hold of them and crush them a protecting force field covers all of our comrades, all of our Frontliners and the hand can’t reach out.

Damn it screams the Evil Superman. His hand comes back through the dice. He punches the Dice hard on the ground. The force he puts into throwing it would crush anything but this medieval and magical dice just bounce up again. Fucking dice. Superman walks off and sits down on his thrown. He contemplates I need more Sentinels. He throws the dice again. I need more armor, more Sentinels he speaks through the dice.


FLYING COMRADES
Chapter 4
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All the frontliners look so relieved. Gwen looks a bit embarrassed. They see hundreds of flying creatures coming closer and closer towards them. They look like birds but they come closer one can see their human-like features.
“You made it time, Warren bows gently to the supposedly the Master of the bird-people. He is wearing a crown. My pleasure my pleasure, our force field have not yet been passed. We believe and tend to think that no force on The Other Side or on any side (he laughs) can overcome our force-field. But however, there is a major strong Evil force close to us. And we dare not go outside our force-field. This is the first time we have moved the force-field. But we had to save you, we know you are the ones who can save The Other Side from total destruction”. Perhaps not me (Warren smiles) but I have brought few comrades with me who are mighty as hell. We call ourselves The Frontliners. He then introduces them all. “You guys must be hungry”, says the Bird-people’s Leader “and dear, dear how is she”? He looks down on Elektra. They are all on the ground now, The Sentinels are laying on the ground and all of the Frontliners face their new comrades. Nick Fury carries Elektra. “She is unconscious, but I think she will be fine”, Fury answers. And he continues: “Yes we are all hungry”.
Gwen walk beside Reilly & Parker on their way to The Flying Ones Home. She takes her arm and wings around them. “Guys you are amazing. How could you fix these Sentinels so fast. I love the wings looks like mine, don’t you think? Peter and Ben start talking at the same time and say at the same time. “You start”. Parker gives in. Ben says: “We want them to look like your wings and the net around them symbolize Spider-Womans wings and Angels wings look similar as well, don’t you think? And yes your Sentinel has major sais like Elektra’s. Watch out when we use them”. Gwen smiles, you guys are so totally cute. She gives both of them a kiss each. Both the Spiders become red in their face. Warren and Captain Stacy walk in the front together with The Flying One’s Leader. His name is "Leader" simply.
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Continue chapter 4
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While all the frontliners were relaxing and enyoying themselves with the Flying Ones the giant and dark Superman was deep in thought.
"They escaped", he thought. The evil God was indeed irritated. Then out of his mind flew pictures of his enemies. They were all there flying around like small bubbles.
The 8 Frontliners
1. Spider-Man
2. Scarlet Spider
3. Nick Fury
4. Nick
5. Angel
6. Spider-Woman
7. Gwen Stacy
8. Elektra
+ 3 more
9. Captain Stacy
10. Warren
11. Falcon the tame beast.

They are twelve now, interesting the Evil Man contemplated. I will crush them one by one. Who will be my first victim? He was rolling the dice. There was only one dice now, the dice had 12 sides, each side contained a hero. Oh, let the dice decide who will be the next to die. Then he started laughing, he laughed and laughed. A very scary laugh reallly. If you would hear it would sound like your worse nightmare. He then decided to throw the dice. It bounced and bounced around the rough surface in the big, big tower.

"What's the nasty noice", Peter whispered into Gwen's ear. He was very close to her now. She liked his smell very much, almost too much. Peter I don't know she almost started crying. I have never heard anything so terrible before, her wings were shaking in a very human way. All the others were all in shock they were all sitting around the mighty table with all the food around them. Being dead in the land of the dead, not being dead being on the other side was nothing like this. The Flying One's Leader stood up. He looked very serious now. "Dear family, dear friends, dear new friends. Something terrible is about to happen. The Creature (that's what they called the Evil Superman) has yet again thrown the dice. Then many of the women started screaming in pain and agony. Tears came down their cheeks. Not again, not again they all screamed.

Then Elektra is lifted up by what seems to be an enormous invisible hand and she is crushed. It's like she is a bubble and seconds later there is nothing left of her but millions of small pieces of her spread everywhere.

Noone says a word. Then they all hear His voice.

"That was the first one more to come".

One older woman stands up and says, "he can't continue now it will take a few days."

All the frontliners run around in cirlces trying to pick up what's left of Elektra, all the pieces. Fury finds the bandage, whole and keeps it in his pocket. He will never get away with this, he will never get away, he whispers.

Noone says a word. The party goes dead quiet and the former paradise turns into a complete hell. All the people are shaking, and shaking. There are no words to describe the situation. I guess all of them who are there can't grasp what has happened and they act like it has never happen. But their bodies shake and the feeling of absolute nothingness is overwhelming them.


Far, far away in another dimension, place, or if you like somewhere else Elektra wakes up. I don't know if you could call her or it Elektra but what is left of her, probably her soul if you so like. She is totally terrified. She has seen her body turn into a million pieces and also felt her body turn into small, small pieces. A calm, calm voice pat her gently on her shoulder. "There is nothing you can co, nothing you can do".


TWO DAYS LATER IN THE FLYING ONES' CAMP

There is not much time bury her now, the older and wise woman says in a stressed voice. The Leader nods quickly. Spider-Man, Scarlet Spider, Nick Fury and Nick all carry the coffin. What a joke, says Ben to the 3 others, bury someone in the land of the dead. It is not a laughing matter, says Fury. I loved her. How can you die here, Ben continues. I don't understand. What happens to you after this? How the hell do we get back, Parker says in a sad voice. Guys we should show some respect to Elektra, I don't know how we are going to survive without her and man I miss this woman, says Nick. We all do, the other 3 say at the same time. We all do. The now 7 frontliners were tighter now, they had a strong bound and one could think they had been a tight team for a long, long time.
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Med tanke på de karaktärer du valt tycker jag det är synd att du inte kan få den illustrerad!

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Peral skrev:Med tanke på de karaktärer du valt tycker jag det är synd att du inte kan få den illustrerad!


Ja tack, visst hade det varit kul. [:)] Shit nu börjar det närma sig slutet. Oj, jag började men denna 2007, he, he. Men det är fortfarande underbart kul att skriva. De kanske dör allihopa...vi får se...
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